The 5-Text Formula: Crafting Messages People Actually Reply To
In 2025, inboxes are overflowing, attention spans are shrinking, and small-business marketers are scrambling for channels that actually work. Enter SMS marketing — a lean, direct line to your audience’s pocket, and when done right, a conversation starter rather than an interruption. But it’s not just the channel that matters: it’s how you use it. At Betwext, we believe the power is in the message structure. Below is a data-driven breakdown of the “5-Text Formula” — five types of messages to send your list, carefully crafted to earn replies, clicks, and conversions.
Why reply-worthy texting works
Before diving into the formula, let’s look at the proof:
- SMS campaigns achieve response rates averaging around 45%, far higher than email’s ~6% (Notifyre; Emarsys; YouCanBookMe).
- SMS open rates hover near 98%, with many reads occurring within mere minutes (Sender; Emarsys; Textla).
- Conversion rates for SMS across industries fall roughly in the 21-40% range (SimpleTexting; Infobip).
These numbers point to three truths:
- Texts get seen.
- Texts get responded to.
- Texts convert — when structured smartly.
So, the next question is: how do you craft texts people actually reply to (not just open)? That’s where the formula comes in.
The 5-Text Formula
Below are five message types, aligned to different stages of the customer journey — each designed for readability, relevance, and action. You can mix and match, test and refine, but the structure stays consistent.
1. The “Welcome & Value” Text
- Purpose: Establish relationship + set expectations.
- Structure: Greeting → personal touch → value offer → soft CTA.
- Example: “Hi [Name], welcome to [Brand]! We’ll send 1-2 VIP offers/month. As thanks, here’s 15% off: REPLY YES to claim.”
- Science note: Early engagement builds trust and signals relevance, raising reply likelihood.
2. The “Question / Quick Reply” Text
- Purpose: Prompt a reply rather than a click.
- Structure: Short conversational copy → one question → reply instruction.
- Example: “Hey [Name], what feature would help you most: A) Faster check-out B) Free shipping? Reply A or B.”
- Data supported: Keeping messages concise and conversational boosts response rates.
3. The “Offer / Promo” Text
- Purpose: Drive conversion via a time-sensitive deal.
- Structure: Value proposition → urgency → clear CTA.
- Example: “Flash sale: 4-hour only! Get 50% off [Product]. Use code FLASH50 or reply ‘CODE’ to get link.”
- Benchmark: Many SMS use cases see click-through or conversion in the 11-20% range for retail (Infobip; SimpleTexting).
4. The “Reminder / Event” Text
- Purpose: Prompt action or reduce friction.
- Structure: Personal context → reminder → simple next step.
- Example: “Hi [Name], your appointment tomorrow at 10 a.m. Reply ‘CONFIRM’ to lock in or ‘CHANGE’ to reschedule.”
- Behavioral insight: People act more when the “next step” is clear and effortless — SMS is perfect for this.
5. The “Follow-Up / Reactivation” Text
- Purpose: Re-engage a dormant subscriber.
- Structure: Value reminder → question or softened CTA.
- Example: “Miss you [Name] — we haven’t heard from you in a bit. Want 20% off your next visit? Reply ‘YES’ and we’ll send it.”
- Data point: Two-way conversation via SMS improves engagement compared to one-way blasts (TxtCart)
Putting the formula into practice
Here are some practical tips to make your 5-Text Formula perform at peak:
- Segment smartly. Use contact behavior (purchase history, opt-in source, location) to tailor which of these texts you send and when
- Keep it brief. Marketing psychology shows that shorter messages perform better — heavy copy feels like work.
- Include a single clear CTA. Too many choices = fewer responses. As one benchmark article notes, clarity matters more than complexity (Textedly).
- Use reply-friendly language. Phrases like “Reply YES to claim” dramatically increase engagement by lowering friction (TxtCart)
- Test the send timing. Timing matters — send when your audience is most available (not driving or asleep). Later afternoon and early evening often win.
- Respect frequency. Sending 2-4 targeted texts/month is a good start; over-messaging triggers opt-outs
Sources
- TxtCart. “How to Improve Your SMS Response Rate for Marketing Campaigns.” https://txtcartapp.com/blog/how-to-improve-your-sms-response-rate-for-marketing
- UseHatch. “11 Tips to Improve Your SMS Response Rates.” https://www.usehatchapp.com/blog/improve-sms-response-rates
- Textla. “Your 2025 Guide to SMS Marketing Metrics.” https://www.textla.com/post/sms-marketing-metrics
- SimpleTexting. “2024 SMS Marketing Benchmarks to Know.” https://simpletexting.com/sms-marketing/benchmarks/
- Infobip. “SMS Marketing Benchmarks: Key Stats by Industry.” https://www.infobip.com/blog/sms-marketing-benchmarks
- Notifyre. “SMS Marketing Statistics 2025: Trends, Insights, and Data.” https://notifyre.com/us/blog/sms-marketing-statistics
- Sender. “SMS Marketing Open Rate Statistics.” https://www.sender.net/blog/sms-open-rates/
- Emarsys. “20+ SMS Marketing Statistics (With Sources) to Know in 2025.” https://emarsys.com/learn/blog/sms-marketing-statistics/
- YouCanBookMe. “11 SMS Best Practices Small Businesses Should Know Before …” https://youcanbook.me/blog/sms-best-practices-for-small-businesses
- MarketingProfs. “How to Harness the Power of SMS Marketing: A Guide to Best-Practices.” https://www.marketingprofs.com/articles/2023/50086/sms-marketing-best-practices-guide
- Textedly. “Essential SMS Marketing Best Practices to Boost Engagement and Sales.” https://www.textedly.com/blog/sms-marketing-best-practices